Tuesday, April 27, 2010

First Words from the Lines of a Love Poem



You
I

You
I

I
You
You
I

You
I
I
You

Yours
Mine
Your
My
I
You

We

Together
Apart
Being
With
Without

I
You
We
Why

Love

Only……


7 comments:

  1. Gosh, what a clever idea, Cam. This is really effective (and already I'm filling in the gaps).

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  2. Thanks Moptop, much appreciated. :-)

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  3. Make it a competition at the Dan! Rewrite the love poem from these first words:

    You were a young Polish milkmaid
    I was a pink washing machine


    (For instance...)

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  4. heh - interesting, but i don't think so Tim. too repetitive. But go ahead if you like, would be intrigued to see what you do. :-)

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  5. My first thought was to write my own version:

    You
    Me
    Elephants
    Nightly
    Why
    You
    Sigh
    Removing
    Catastrophic
    I
    Mutants
    Green
    Bubble
    You
    Kiss
    Vermillion
    Us
    Arrrrrrrrrrrrgh!
    I
    I
    I
    I
    I....

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  6. Though I should have just said this is a good concept and a good poem and like a lot of such ideas it inspires me as well! :)

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  7. Heh - appreciated man. never stop elaborating and playing, you can make as many comments as you like. :-)

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